Once upon a time there was a boy
that watched a flock of sheep. He wanted
some company so he pretended that there was a wolf. He charged down the slope and he screamed
“Wolf, Wolf!!!”
The villagers sprinted to see if
the boy was unharmed. The villagers told
the boy to never shriek false alarms
again, 3 days later the extremely naughty boy did the same thing again and
again.
The villagers came sprinting. The villagers were ticked off that there was
no wolf. Five days later a wolf really
came out of the forest. When the wolf came out he made a humongous meal of the flock. The flock was never ever seen again. The boy was gutted! The villagers thought it was for the boys own good and that he should never ever, ever lie again.
Wow Daniel looks like you have been doing some great writing.
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ReplyDeleteWOW Daniel such great expressive writing, we are really proud of your hard work and getting this much detail into the re-telling of this story. You were also able to get the re-telling pretty much correct. I thought the words sprinting and humongous gave us real pictures of what was going on in the story. Keep going Daniel, what is your next writing assignment going to be about???
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Wow I liked it when screamed wolf wolf
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